If you didn't like BREAKING DAWN and you could create your own version, what would happen?

If I could change Breaking Dawn, first of all...


1. Bella would have never gotten pregnant.


I think Stephanie Meyer put this in the story to surprise the readers, but it had a negative effect. I think effected all of the characters in a negative light. Rosalie looked like a self centered, self absorbed, selfishbitch. Bella looked like even more of an idiot. Jacob became a pervert/pedophile and anyone who says it's okay for him to imprint, you need to get your head out of the clouds. That's disgusting, it's an infant there's nothing romantic about it.





Edward and Bella would have gotten married, went on their honeymoon, and returned to Forks unpregnant. About a month later, Bella would start to realize how over protective Edward was and how he bossed her around and made most of the decisions. She also would have realized that she depended on him and needed him which is a weakness. She would become more independent and grow a backbone. She would realize that she didn't want to become one of those pathetic, pitiful girls who become dependent on a relationship and very clingy and needy and jump off cliffs to cater to their dellusions when their boyfriend's brake up with them so she got a social life and decided to go to college. She would travel and try new things and become a vampire a year later.





2. Leah and Jacob would be together.


I think the two of them would be really good for each other. They're both likeable (when they want to be) and they both have a good sense of humor. They are also really close because they can hear all of each other's thoughts. There would be a scene where Jacob would be opening up to Leah and she would just be sitting there, quiet and listening to him. He finishes and there's just silence then Leah says ';Get a god damn grip. You are not missing out on much. If you get with Bella, she won't be able to breathe 15 minutes without you. Is that what you really want with your life!!? Honestly...why do you even like her so much? Do you even know?? Give me one good reason';, knocking some common sense into Jacob with a reality check. then Jacob would FINALLY come to his senses and realize how much of a self centered, self absorbed, needy, clingy, whiny, complainy (I know that's not a word, but that's not the point) person Bella is. ';Do you really want to be with someone who jumped off of a cliff to cater to their obsession with a dellusion?'; Leah asked. that did it. Jacob is over Bella Swan...for good. ';Besides, why want that when you can have me'; and Jacob and Leah get together. They both imprint later but it doesn't matter because their love is so much stronger for each other since they both helped each other with Bella/Sam so they're really close verses practically falling in love with someone you've known for 5 seconds.





3. Emmett is hunting in the forest one day. A girl is looking for her brother. She's mumbling under her breath ';God damn it, youmotherfucker. Why the hell would you go wondering in the forest at 2fucking a.m. to go after a cat that's not even yours. really. I want to know. Laila Dennis isn't even that cute or that great so why are you chasing after her cat....'; she slips in the mud and lands in the creek getting soaked. ';************'; she shouts. she broke her leg and can't get up when three wolves start comming near her. she's trapped. she picks up a stick then looks at it and mentally slaps herself ';I'm screwed.'; she says. her voice causes all of the wolves to come at her when all of the sudden something comes out of nowhere and moves so fast. all she can hear is whimpering andshit (lol I'm lazy sue me haha I mean sew I just left 'sue' there becuase I can't believe I just wrote that and I think it's funny). A tall muscular guy is in her face before she knows it with blood all over him. ';Are you okay?'; she screams as she notices the dead wolves..';What the ****!!? Who does that?...I've got to be dreaming.'; blah blah blah...basically....she reailizes through shock that she was bitten and is losing lots of blood so Emmett's sexyass bites her and they fall in love and happily ever after. He leaves Rosalie because Rosalie is a pessimistic, self centered, sefish, materialisticbitch. No one in the Cullen family really liked her all that much so it didn't break their hearts when she moved to Alaska to live with what's their faces.








Bella has a big scar on her face because Leah kickedherass. Jacob has a scar on his chest because he and Edward got into it but Jacob's scar looks good on him and he looks bad and sexy. Jacob bit Edward's ear off haha





I'm grounded and bored. I've never written a question this long.


What would you do if you could edit Breaking Dawn?If you didn't like BREAKING DAWN and you could create your own version, what would happen?
Bella wouldn't get pregnant. Jacob would be so heartbroken over losing Bella that he would jump off a cliff, or the Volturi would FINALLY make themselves useful and kill him! Then Bella would become a vampire and they would live happily ever after, but not before Bella and Rosalie got in a catfight and Bella would win!If you didn't like BREAKING DAWN and you could create your own version, what would happen?
basically what u said cuz i remember you asking this question i didn't answer but i looked up ur question but honestly people will probably get pissed off because their are a lot of crazy breaking dawn lovers on this did u see this girls video here i'll give u the link


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Well, Bella would first realize that Jacob was an asshole and an overprotective one at that, trying to steal her away from Edward and totally get him out of her life. Then, she and Edward would get married and go to their honeymoon, and then she gets changed, but they don't get each other pregnant, cuz techinally, a dead guy couldn't get a living girl preggers in the first place, which obviously Stephenie Meyer didn't realize at the time she ruined the book, and consequently, the rest of the series.


Then, using her awesome vampire strength, she'd kill Jacob Black and Emmett, then become best friends with Seth and get with Carlisle, totally ditching Edward so he's out of the picture. Then, she'll kill the totally jealous Esme while she's at it, then run away with Carlisle, Alice, and the freakin' awesome Jasper and become an uncivil, HUMAN eating caveman.
They would all die.
they would all die.