okayy so i need to rewrite the break up scene between edward and bella in New Moon
i need to write six pages so i need something to expand on!!How should i change the break up scene between edward and bella?
He could have fallen for someone else.
Alice could have seen her leaving him.
Bella could leave him.How should i change the break up scene between edward and bella?
I think that you should have Edward leave Bella for a hot vampire lady. And then have Bella die. It'd make everyone happy.
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