Song about a struggling marriage?

I'm a lyricist and i wanted to connect with people who were having marriage problems. how do you think i did?



Can't be over:



Im tired of changes, broke down faces

Pitch black alone in a corner crying on my own shoulders

The days keep building, betrayed feelings

Of a time filled with passion now a time filled with drama



I've been waiting for a white winged dove to cry



Impossible leads me nowhere unstoppable is not true

Im trapped inside a maze cant get pass this barricade



The road Im taking, hearts breaking

The tunnel vision that passes me by only see the tragic sky

Silent payments, forget arrangements

Conviction that use to be in your eyes now as if you were blind



Ive been waiting for a white winged dove to cry



Impossible leads me nowhere unstoppable is not true

Im trapped inside a maze cant get pass this barricade

Impossible leads me nowhere unstoppable is not true

Im trapped inside a maze cant get pass this barricade



I want to go home, we can make this better

Home will heal our feelings

I want to go home, so we can make it better



Impossible leads me nowhere unstoppable is not true

Im trapped inside a maze gonna get pass this barricade



By Brandon Perry漏2009Song about a struggling marriage?
Really well done.



Very seriously. Nice symoblism.Song about a struggling marriage?
this is perfect. really. brought tears to this wife's eyes, for sure.
Refer to ';Highway to Hell'; by ACDC for some good pointers.
Nicely done :)